The one way that at least help this picture in a few ways is lighted up the edges of the picture because it seems to dark but i know that its so post to be like that because is wanted by the NSA for reveling secrets but if you wanted to stick with that idea that you had then i would recommend have it a tiny bit darker in the center so it just shows the American flag an just him not show his shoulders you can black out his shirt a little bit to because i know that his shirt is already blacked out but if you can move his hand a bit closer to his other one so that you make the edged more take and seem like there is no hope around but there is hope with him holding the flag make him look like he was the last hope of reveling the NSA and what are they hiding from us the